Final

I have learned a lot of things about writing a paper. I was never really a good writer but I have become a lot better over the last 10 weeks. I got to work on how to do a thesis sentences better and how to write a paper better. I feel I could still work in a lot of areas like just putting my paper together. I always get enough information but don't always know how to put it into the paper. It has been fun with everyone in class and it has been great getting to know everyone.

My Final Paper

I feel good that I got it done before it is due. I just turned it into the Writing Center to see what they think of it and see what kind of mistakes they can find for me. I am a little worried because at the end I only had five pages so I hope the stuff I added goes with my paper. I hope everything flows together I have good confidence in myself. I have learned to become a better writer with this class and I hope I can become a even better writer in the future.

How I did with the Blog

I think I kept up with it for the most part this is my first late blog. It has been interesting using the blog because I am not use to it. I don' t think I will keep up with it after this class because I really don't see myself keeping up with it but who knows I might end up using it sometimes to keep in touch with classmates.

Peer reviews

I like to do peer reviews because then you can see how your classmates think about your paper and what suggestions they can give you to help. Plus you also get to see other classmates papers so you can see kind of what your paper should look like if you are stuck. When I first picked this topic I thought that mentally ill inmates would be treated better then normal inmates but that is not the case they are treated really bad compared to normal people.

The first Draft

I am still putting my draft together I am still confused about a few things that I am going to have to work out. I will get it together before it is due. It has been ok the last six weeks I thought about what I wanted to do my paper on I found some research to help me out. It just has been hard for me a thesis that goes with what I want to write about

Writing process

I like to do freewriting because then I can just write and not worry about making mistakes. Then when I am done freewritng then I can go back and put my paper together and make it sound the way I want it too. It is easier for me then doing bubbles or anything like that. I also like making a list and brainstorming.

A Post for Last Week

Last week was a good week. I relaxed got all my school work done. I played with kids and had fun. We had a nice day and got to play outside for awhile Jamal loved it. I started a new diet and actually sticking to it for once. Well Hope everyone has a great week.

Life mixing with school

Sometimes it gets really hard to do school work and take care of the house and kids. Sometimes I get really tired I fell like I have so much on my plate. I just need to take a breath and relax so I can get by this week.

My Life

This is my 4 month old Xavier he will be 5 months Nov 2

My Life

This is my 17 month old Jamal he will be 18 months Nov 12

My Lfe

Here is a picture of my boys. We are big COLTS FANS!!!!!!!I love being a mommy it is so much fun. It has been crazy both of my boys have been sick and having man trouble like always. I just keep telling myself that it will get better which I know it will.I have been real busy.

The first time I have ever did a blog!!!!

I am kinda of excited this is the first time I have ever did a blog. It is kinda neat. I am nervous that I am not going to say the right thing. This is all new to me. Well I am 25 and have two kids they are my life. Well hopefully next time I will have more to talk about. Have a good week!!